Thursday, July 14, 2011

RFW Surrender


I surrender to his warm embrace
I surrender to his sweet kisses
All the tender moments I  surrender to
I surrender to my racing heart beat when he is near me
I surrender to his loving arms
I surrender my heart to him
I surrender everything that I am
It is because of him
So I surrender it all to my dear sweet man

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11 comments:

  1. ScarletJuly 14, 2011 at 3:37 PM

    Very sweet and romantic ~

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  2. The PoetJuly 14, 2011 at 4:46 PM

    Ah...There's nothing like sweet surrender:-)

    Nicely done!

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  3. dolorahJuly 15, 2011 at 12:13 AM

    Wow; I take it she has surrendered to love, passion, and a lifetime of possession. Intriguing.

    ..........dhole

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  4. Francine HowarthJuly 15, 2011 at 12:41 AM

    Hi,

    Lovely piece, and great dedication to a lover! ;)

    best
    F

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  5. Kiru TayeJuly 15, 2011 at 3:29 AM

    A lovely poem and use of the theme. I like this especially
    'I surrender to my racing heart beat when he is near me' :o))

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  6. UnknownJuly 15, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    Awwwwww

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  7. Paula MartinJuly 15, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    Very sweet :-)

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  8. Marsha A. MooreJuly 15, 2011 at 5:18 PM

    Those thoughts rolled through my mind with fluidity...very nice feeling.

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  9. Beverly DiehlJuly 15, 2011 at 9:53 PM

    Hoping he's worth all that surrender! (He IS sweet, at least!) :-)

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  10. THE SARCASM GODDESSJuly 18, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    Such a beautiful thing to be able to trust so deeply and surrender everything you are. Nicely written!

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  11. Just miss cJuly 18, 2011 at 7:19 PM

    Thanks for all the comments and to everyone who read my poem.

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